Re: poem about love!!!!!

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:20 am

the one on this page?

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:21 am

its good

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:22 am

i hope it is most of it is about a real event in my life?^^

by **kirino ducky uchiha** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:22 am

its wonderful

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:23 am

really?

by **Misa Amane** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:23 am

i like its really good

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:25 am

tnx!^^
it only took me 3minutes^^

by **Santi** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:27 am

"yeah thats pretty good your getting the hang of it keep it up"

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:28 am

(thinking of another poem)

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:31 am

good job bro

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:35 am

"when i first saw her,
i looked in her eyes
i made me wonder but i dont know y
i hope i get to see her again

i thought i might tell her about my feelings
but then i thought that id might scare her
so i talked to her again and again
soon enough we became best friends

i asked her out to see how we go
we both seemed to like another really much
we had fun on our very first date
n we lived together in harmony"

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:35 am

nice bro

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:39 am

tnx all this comes from heart!^^ I love you

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:41 am

amazing one minute your evil then your mushy again

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:49 am

when i first met her,
i fell in love
they say there isnt love at first sight.
but i think they r outta their minds.

when i first kissed her,
i knew i could fly,
and wen she didnt hold back.
i knew our luv would last."

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:51 am

by **Santi** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:54 am

heres another one i just threw together i dont think that its as good as the other ones let me know what you think....

stuck alone with this awful feeling
and i thought that you should know,

that every night i feel so alone now,
when i dont have you to hold....

and im caught up in this war...
but tell me what am i fighting for...

if i cant have you....
and im stuck on these shores...

watching the ocean roar...
how im missing you....

and ill write these letters to you hoping youll reply...
and ill count the hours down til your by my side...

and im sorry so sorry for leaving you all alone...
how im sorry so sorry for leaving and being gone...

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:55 am

Good!

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:56 am

great

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:59 am

my poems r good 4 just starting like 30 minutes ago..........^^

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 1:59 am

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 8:34 am

my evil poem!!!!!!!!!! Twisted Evil

"when they piss me off
i punch them
nd smash them

until they bleed
ill kill them
i live for the moment of
my annoyances death"

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 8:45 am

my poem

when the talk it makes me mad when the walk i still am mad
but when there in my face i eat them

by **Shika Aburame** Sat Mar 22, 2008 8:47 am

(runs like hell)

by **Onikira** Sat Mar 22, 2008 8:48 am

(i chase him)

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